Question

【题目】书面表达

2014年10月28日上午，滨海港10万吨级码头开港试航，滨海人民从此进入了大港时代。小明上星期日去参观了滨海港。请帮助小明根据下表中的记录的要点，以“A trip to Binhai Port (港口) ”为题， 写一篇80词左右的英语短文, 介绍他的滨海港之旅。必须包括全部要点，并作适当发挥。

When	28 October, 2014
Where	Binhai Port
Who	my English teacher and some of my classmates
What to do	meet at the school gate at eight o’clock, take a bus there
	watch the ships sailing
	take photos, take a boat trip
	have some sea food for lunch
	come back home later in the afternoon

A trip to Binhai Port

Binhai Port was open to shipping for the first time on October 28, 2014.

I had an unforgettable trip to Binhai Port last Sunday.

I hope you can have a trip there soon, too. I am sure you will enjoy yourself.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

A trip to Binhai Port

Binhai Port was open to shipping for the first time on October 28, 2014.

I had an unforgettable trip to Binhai Port last Sunday. I went with my English teacher and some of my classmates. We met at the school gate at eight o’clock, then we took a bus to the port. It took us about one and a half hours to get there. When we got there, we took many photos first. We couldn’t wait to take a boat trip. We were all excited to see the ships sailing. We ate some sea food for lunch at a restaurant. It was so delicious. We came back home later in the afternoon. We all felt very tired. But it was really an exciting trip.

I hope you can have a trip there soon, too. I am sure you will enjoy yourself.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。在写作前首先要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

再次根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。根据所给材料可知本文主要使用一般过去时态。

写作亮点：该文语句流畅，准确表达了题目中的每个要点。还多次使用了连接词and、but以及固定句型如It took us about one and a half hours to get there.，We couldn’t wait to take a boat trip.等等，都为文章增色不少。