Question

【题目】下面是Learning English杂志社发给全国中学生的一封电子邮件。假如你叫李华，你对该邮件中的问题很感兴趣，请你给该杂志社的编辑回一封电子邮件，参与此次活动。

Dear students,

There must be some rules in your family, right? How do you like them? What's the best rule and what's the worst rule? Please e-mail us and share your thoughts with our readers.

Learning English

Dear students,

There must be some rules in your family, right? How do you like them? What's the best rule and what's the worst rule? Please e-mail us and share your thoughts with our readers.

Learning English

要求：词数90左右，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

There are many rules in my family, some good and some bad.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

There are many rules in my family, some good and some bad. I have to be home by 8:00 p.m. It's the best rule because it's dangerous to come back home late. I'm not allowed to watch TV on school nights. In my opinion, I need time to relax instead of studying all the time. This is a bad rule but the worst one is that I'm not allowed to join any clubs. My parents think it would be bad for my schoolwork. It's a pity because I'm very interested in basketball.

I wish my parents could understand me and give me more freedom.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，谈论你的家规。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be allowed to do, in my opinion, instead of, all the time, be bad for以及be interested in等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。