Question

【题目】书面表达 （共1题，满分15分）

十九世纪七十年代，美国人Martin Cooper发明了手机。你了解手机有多少呢，你觉得学生可以带手机到学校吗？请谈谈你的观点以及你的理由（至少三点理由）

发 明 人	Martin Cooper
时 间	In the 1970s
用 途	过去	打电话
	现在	1 拍照 2 上网聊天 3…… 4……
你的观点 及理由	……. (至少三点理由)

Nowadays, the smart mobile phones have played an important role in our daily life. But do you know who invented（发明） the mobile phones?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, the smart mobile phones have played an important role in our daily life. But do you know who invented the mobile phones? The first mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in the 1970s. In the past, it was only used to make a telephone call. But now people can use it to take photos or chant online. Some mobile phones can be used as an Mp3 or even Mp4. That is, we can listen to music or English with it. In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to take phones to school. Using the mobile phone is bad for students. It will affect their study. Some students will play games or listen to music using their mobile phones in class .And they will send the information to their friends. That’s too bad for them to study well.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇以手机为主题议论文。利用表格中提供的一些信息，对手机的用途作一介绍，分析当前的现状，对学生可不可以带手机到学校？手机的利与弊，谈谈自己的观点以及理由。书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要写三点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。

写作亮点：文中两个被动语态的句子使用的十分准确：The first mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in the 1970s. In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to take phones to school.介绍手机的用途时，转折连词but使用的很好，说明现在的手机用途越来越多。阐述自己的观点时理由也很充分。