题目内容
4.初中阶段的学习马上就要结束了,在这三年中,你一定和你的同学结下了深厚的友谊.请根据下面英语提示,写一篇80词左右的短文,讲述你和同学之间的故事.
提示:1.Who is your best friend?
2.What makes you get on well with her/him?
3.One unforgettable thing happened to you two.
How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.I have a lot of friends in No.5 Middle School.One of them is my best friend.His name is Li Hua.I regard him as my best friend.Because.he's always helpfuland friendly to me.We're in the same grade,butin different classes.we help each other.Sometimeswe fight but we always get along well.Whathe attracts me most is that he likes music,too.Wheneverwe have time,we listen to pop songs together.
I had so many memories in three years'life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember,whenI began to learn English,I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried,I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as hefound my problem,he had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then,he has kept helping me.Little by little,I've become interested in English and I'm good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her friends. She is my best friend I'll never forget..
分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是讲述你和同学之间的故事.时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时.人称主要为第一人称和第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1谁是你的最好的朋友
2什么让你们相处的很好
3一件难忘的事情
常用到的重点短语:
regard …as…把…视作…
no matter how 无论怎样
do well in 擅长
give up 放弃
little by little 逐渐地
as soon as 一…就…
【高分句型】
1.①What he attracts me ②most is that he likes music,too.
①从句作为主语,谓语动词用单数.
②much的最高级most.
2.①No matter how hard I tried,I still couldn't ③do well in it and almost ③gave it up.
①no matter how 无论怎样,引导的让步状语从句.
②do well in 擅长
③give up 放弃
3.①As soon as he found my problem,he②had a talk with me about ③how to learn English well.
①as soon as 一…就…引导时间状语从句
②have a talk with sb 与某人交谈
③疑问词+动词不定式,作为about的宾语.
解答 How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.I have a lot of friends in No.5 Middle School.One of them is my best friend.His name is Li Hua.I regard him as my best friend.(谁是你的最好的朋友)Because he's always helpful and friendly to me.We're in the same grade,but in different classes.we help each other.Sometimes we fight but we always get along well.What he attracts me most is that he likes music,too.【高分句型】Whenever we have time,we listen to pop songs together.(什么让你们相处的很好)
I had so many memories in three years'life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember,when I began to learn English,I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried,I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up.【高分句型】As soon as he found my problem,he had a talk with me about how to learn English well【高分句型】.Since then,he has kept helping me.Little by little,I've become interested in English and I'm good at it.(一件难忘的事情)I think I am so lucky to become one of her friends. She is my best friend I'll never forget.(感受)
点评 初中英语的作文,着重考察学生连词成句的能力,要在"准"字上下功夫.在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面.在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式.对于中学作文的写作,尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中,写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章,不要出现中式英文.在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子进行默写,考试时就能写出准确地道的作文.
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