根据中文和英文提示.写出一封意思连贯.符合逻辑.不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出.其词数不计入所要完成的回信内．所给英文提示词语供选用．请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名．假如你叫李平.最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论人生梦想的话题.他想了解你的梦想是什么.你为什么会有这样的梦想.你准备怎样实现你的梦想．请根据他的问题回复邮件．提示� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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9．根据中文和英文提示，写出一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内．所给英文提示词语供选用．请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名．
假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论人生梦想的话题，他想了解你的梦想是什么，你为什么会有这样的梦想，你准备怎样实现你的梦想．请根据他的问题回复邮件．
提示词语：visit，know，understand，different，free，culture
What's your dream in your life？
Why do you have such a dream？
What are you going to do to realize your dream？

My dream is to travel all over the world because I love travelling．
I think travelling is really a good way to know about different people and different cultures from different countries．It can not only help me get more information and widen my eyes，but also let me feel relaxed．
To realize my dream，I think it's important to work hard with all my subjects，such as history，English and geography．Thus，when I visit other countries，I can understand their cultures better，and talk with the local people more freely．What about your dream？．

分析这是一篇提纲作文．内容给你的英国朋友John写一封邮件谈谈人生梦想，注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1人生梦想是什么？
2为什么有如此梦想？
3怎样实现梦想？
常用到的重点短语：
all over the world全世界
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
such as 例如
【高分句型】
1．I think ①②travelling is really a good way ③to know about different people and different cultures from different countries．
①think后接上省略了that的宾语从句．
②travelling 动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数is．
③动词不定式作为后置定语，修饰way．
2．It can①not only ②help me get more information and widen my eyes，but also ③let me feel relaxed．
①not only…but also…不仅…而且…，连接两个对等成分．
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③let sb do sth让某人做某事

解答 My dream is to travel all over the world because I love travelling．（人生梦想是什么）
I think travelling is really a good way to know about different people and different cultures from different countries【高分句型】．It can not only help me get more information and widen my eyes，but also let me feel relaxed．【高分句型】（为什么有如此梦想）
To realize my dream，I think it's important to work hard with all my subjects，such as history，English and geography．Thus，when I visit other countries，I can understand their cultures better，and talk with the local people more freely．What about your dream？（怎样实现梦想）

点评本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．