Question

【题目】请以My best friend为题，写一篇70词左右的短文。

参考信息：1. 年龄 2. 外貌描述 3. 爱好习惯 4.你喜欢他/她的理由

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Answer 1

【答案】My best friend is Tom. He is 13 years old. He has short hair and a big nose. He is fat and strong. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He always goes hiking with me. I like him because he always helps me when I need him. He is very kind and often let me feel happy.

【解析】

本文是材料作文。首先，写作之前必须认真审题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求以My best friend.写一篇短文，介绍自己最好的朋友，故应该用第三人称作主语。其次，根据参考信息提示可知时态是一般现在时，写作内容包括年龄、外貌、爱好习惯、以及喜欢他/她的理由等等，注意不可遗漏要点。再次，要熟练使用所学短语、句型，注意连词的使用等，是文章语句通顺、符合逻辑。最后，要检查格式、单词拼写、标点等。本文行文连贯，要点全面，还运用了亮点短语及句型，如go hiking, play basketball, like doing, because引导的原因状语从句及when引导的时间状语从句等。