Question

【题目】书面表达

你校正在举行“Young Star Award”的评选活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学

刘强，以供参评。

提示：1．高大强壮，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；

2．乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善（charity），帮助贫困学生；

3．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。

要求：1．短文须包括以上要点，可作适当发挥；

2．词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

Liu Qiang is my classmate.

Answer 1

【答案】Liu Qiang is my classmate. He is tall and strong, so he is good at playing basketball. And he gets good grades in each subject. He is willing to help others. He takes an active part in different activities at school. He likes doing charity work. Sometimes he organizes charity shows to raise money for the poor students. He won high prize from teachers and students in our school. We are proud of him.

He sets a good example. I hope the Young Star Award can accept him.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如tall and strong，be good at，play basketball，get good grades，be willing to do，help others，take an active part in，in different activities，like doing charity work，set a good example，be proud of等。而并列句He is tall and strong, so he is good at playing basketball.和宾语从句I hope the Young Star Award can accept him.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。