题目内容
【题目】在我们的一生中会遇见很多的人和事。总有那个人或那件事情让懵懂的你有了改变。每一个人物都给我们不小的震动,每一段故事都留给我们深刻的印象。回想那人也许是在你处于困境时及时伸出援助之手,也许是在你需要帮助时给你的无私的爱,或者鼓励你面对困难时努力不懈地奋斗。请补全 “__________ changed me a lot” 的题目,写一篇80个词的短文,记述一件难忘的事给你带来的改变。
要求:1. 字数不少于80。
2. 语言通畅、书写规范、字迹清晰工整、卷面整洁、格式规范。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
__________ changed me a lot
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【答案】范文
My father changed me a lot
My father changed me a lot. He is not a teacher but he taught me a lot of life lessons.
In the past, I always wanted to give up when the things was difficult for me to finish. One day my father took me to the Great Wall. I was too tired to climb to the top of the Great Wall. So I just wanted to give up in the halfway. But my father encouraged me and said “A few difficulties will not discourage us. If you get to the top, you will be amazed at how beautiful the view will be.” Finally, I managed to get to the top and enjoyed the beautiful sceneries.
From then on, I started to try my best to keep on doing anything instead of giving it up in the halfway.
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题属于话题作文,学生应该先补全作文题目再进行写作。该话题内容多涉及过去的一些经历,全文主要时态应用一般过去时。