Question

3．由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强．请你根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇60-80词的短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立性．

Ways	Things we can do
begin with our own things	打扫我们自己的房间…
help with housework	煮饭…
learn actively	准时完成作业…
think about things by ourselves	独自做决定，不依赖被人…

注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥．
要求句子通顺，语法正确，并注意标点符号和大小写．
As middle school students，it's very important for us to be independent．What should we do to make us independent？First，                       I think if we keep on doing these，we'll become more and more independent．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds打扫自己的房间铺床是我们的职责．
it's+名词+to do sth 做某事是…it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
【高分句型二】
Don't always depend on others不要总是依赖他人．
depend on 依赖

解答 As middle school students，it's very important for us to be independent．What should we do to make us independent？First，let's begin with our own things．It's our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds．【高分句型一】（做好自己的事情）Second，help with housework．We can help cook or clean the house in our free time．Doing housework shoud learn by ourselves．（做家务）Third，learn actively．We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time．（积极学习）Finally，think about things by ourselves．We sometimes need to make plans or dicisions alone．Don't always depend on others．【高分句型二】（自己做决定）I think if we keep on doing these，we'll become more and more independent．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．