Question

1．假如你叫李华，是"中华好少年"（China's Good Child）的候选人之一，请写一份材料，介绍你在家里、在学校、在社会上（in society ）的表现．
写作要求：1．词数在80左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2．短文中不能出现校名和人名，否则不得分；
3．所给的写作要点都必须用上，紧扣主题，适当发挥．
My name is Li Hua，I am lucky to be chosen as one of China's Good ChildrenMy name is Li Hua．I am lucky to be chosen as one of China's Good Children．I am a good boy in my home，I get up early everyday and do some reading，then I do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．I often do some housework at home．
At school，I study hard and do the homework carefully．In class I often answer questions and after class，I often help the students with their lessons．In society，I often help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．
Li   Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit．做运动不仅能帮助我们保持健康．Doing exercise 是动名词做主语，注意后面的谓语动词用单数．
高分句型二
I study hard and do the homework carefully．我努力学习，认真做作业．注意carefully是副词，修饰动词，放在动词的后面．

解答 I am a good boy in my home，I get up early every day and do some reading，then I do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit【高分句型一，注意动名词的使用】，but also help to train a person's character．I often do some housework at home．【在家的表现】
At school，I study hard and do the homework carefully【高分句型二，注意副词的使用】．In class I often answer questions and after class I often help the students with their lessons．【在学校的表现】In society，I often help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．【在社会上的表现】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．