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6．每个人都有自己的业余爱好，有益的业余爱好不但可以陶冶我们的情操，增强我们的体质，放松我们的身心，还能让我们在学习或工作时精力更旺盛，效率更高．作为一名中学生，你在忙碌的学习之余做些什么？请根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈一谈你的业余爱好．
1．写作要点提示：
（1）你的业余爱好是什么；
（2）重点讲述你从事业余爱好的一次经历；
（3）你的业余爱好对你学习、生活的影响．
2．写作要求：
短文的内容应包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，使短文的意思连贯；短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；短文的词数在90 个左右．

分析 【高分句型一】
And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well后来，我参加了美术课程，这样我就可以与绘画的距离更近，也可以更好地了解它
so that引导的目的状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Since that time，I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life自从那次，我感觉美术就像是一个我心里的那个和我真心交谈，让我开心的人．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的person．

解答 My Hobby
I like drawing．It does bring me happiness．（爱好是什么）
As a kid，I was keen on those lines and curves drawn on paper made into animals and scenes．It really could show beauty to people and express my feelings．And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well．【高分句型一】But at that time，I just did it for fun．
Years went by，I got into a long period of time filled with pressure in study．And I found it so good a way to relax．It did not any longer play an unimportant role in my living，but bacame my friend．（一次经历）
Since that time，I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life．【高分句型二】This is my hobby，not just a hobby，but also a true friend．（对你学习、生活的影响）

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
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