Question

【题目】作文

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所给提示词仅供选用。

注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名，请不要抄写本试卷文章中的原句。

假设你叫李华，最近和自己的英国朋友Peter在谈论各自敬佩的人物，他在上封邮件中向你介绍了自己所敬佩的一位作家，他希望你也能向他介绍一位自己所敬佩的人。请根据他提出的以下问题给他回复一封邮件。

参考词汇：work hard；kind；helpful；responsible；role model

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Hi! Peter,

Thanks for telling me about J. K. Rowling. She is really a great writer!

One of the people I admire a lot is my father. He is a history teacher at a middle school. He loves his job and works very hard. To make his students interested in history, he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson. He is also patient and helpful to his students.

As for me, he is not only my father but also a good friend. Whenever I have problems, he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement. My father is my role model. He has taught me to be kind, hardworking and responsible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍你所敬佩的人，所敬佩的人的性格特征及你为什么所敬佩他。根据所给的要点可知该文主要用一般现在时，要注意第三人称单数形式的正确表达。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言连贯，简洁明了。在文章中使用恰当的复合句，为文章增色不少，同时也体现出作者的写作功底。例如：One of the people I admire a lot is my father.（我最敬佩的人物之一诗我的父亲）；Whenever I have problems, he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement.（每当我遇到问题时，他都是第一个给我建议和鼓励的人）等等。