Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let's do something to protect our environment.”为题写一篇80--100字的短文。1 重要性：只有一个地球。 2 主要问题： 各种污染。 3 措施：做些什么减少污染，保护大自然。

Answer 1

【答案】

Let’s Do Something to save Our Environment .

We all live on the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.

It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution. We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories. Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如 It’s our duty to ...，take care of, be strict with，ask sb to do sth.等；连词so, if, and等能够很好的连接文章； 文章的句式也较丰富，简单句、条件状语从句等都有所使用。根据要求，做了恰到好处的发挥，效果不错。