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11．最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理．针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为"与父母和谐相处"的征文大赛．作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以"How to Get on Well with Our Parents？"为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛．
一．写作要点提示
1．与父母和谐相处很重要．
2．与父母和谐相处的做法或建议
（1）理解与尊重父母（如倾听与有礼貌表达想法）；
（2）多与父母交流（如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼）；
（3）与父母和谐相处的感受．
二．写作要求
短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80-100词．
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents．But how can we get along well with our parents．Here is some of my advice．
We should understand and respect our parents．Parents talk much because they care about us．We are supposed to listen to them．When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way．We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems．When we are free，we'd better help them do some things．
I get on well with my parents．I enjoy sharing everything with my parents．My parents are like my best friends．They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble．We love each other．
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents对于我们来说与父母和谐相处很重要．it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
Parents talk much because they care about us父母说那么多是因为他们在乎我们．
because 引导的原因状语从句

解答 How to Get on Well with Our Parents
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents．【高分句型一】（与父母和谐相处很重要） But how can we get along well with our parents．Here is some of my advice．
We should understand and respect our parents．Parents talk much because they care about us．【高分句型二】We are supposed to listen to them．（理解与尊重父母）When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way．（多与父母交流）We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems．When we are free，we'd better help them do some things．
I get on well with my parents．I enjoy sharing everything with my parents．My parents are like my best friends．They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble．We love each other．（与父母和谐相处的感受．）
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents．

点评 短文第一段提出观点：与父母融洽相处很重要．开门见山，直奔主题．第二段是对如何与父母融洽相处的建议，详略得当，重点突出，中心明确．第三段谈论自己的生活感受；最后号召人们同父母融洽相处结尾．短文层次清楚，语言连贯．短文用should，be supposed to，had better等等不同的形式来表示人们的责任与义务，生动具体．其中用到的动词不定式，时间状语从句，宾语从句等，也增加了本文的文采．