Question

18．作为一名学生，你发现有许多同学在学校就餐时存在不同程度的浪费食物的现象，对此请你根据以下要点，以Don't waste any more为标题写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家节约粮食，防止浪费．
1．Food is important to us…
2．Many students waste much food．For example…
3．Lots of people are short of food in the world，die of hunger．
4．We should have a good habit．
参考词汇：leave…on the plate（留…在盘里）；pour…into（倒进…）；rubbish can（垃圾桶）
要求：①70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；
②语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
③文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名．
Don't waste any more
Food is very important to us．                                           
Let's take an active part together!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：In order to make China dream come true，we should save everything as well as the food in our life．为了实现中国的梦想，我们要节约一切以及我们生活中的食物．In order to为了，as well as 也，以及．
高分句型二：What's more，lots of people are short of food in the world．更重要的是，世界上许多人缺乏食物．What's more，更重要的是，be short of短缺．

解答 Food is important to us．It's everyone's duty to save food．But at school not everyone can realize this【要点一，食物的重要性】．Many students waste much food．For example，some students buy more food than they need．They leave much on the plate and then pour it into the rubbish can．Some students even throw the food everywhere for fun【要点二，列举浪费食物的现象】．Our country is a developing county．In order to make China dream come true，we should save everything as well as the food in our life【高分句型一，注意固定词组的使用】．What's more，lots of people are short of food in the world【高分句型二，注意注意固定词组的使用】．They live a hard life and many of them，especially some children，die of hunger【要点三，世界粮食现状】．We should have a good habit．Let's take an action part together!【要点四，呼吁要采取行动，节约粮食】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．