Question

【题目】以“My friend”为题，写一篇文章向大家介绍你的朋友，文章要包含朋友的基本信息，包括姓名，年龄，学校，年级，电话号码，外貌等等，

要求：1。可适当增加内容 2。词数不少于50。

Answer 1

【答案】My friend

Hello！My name is Linda Cooper. I'm 12 and from England. I have a good friend. She is a girl. Her name is Wang Mengtong. She is twelve years old, too. She has a round face like an apple. Her hair is long and black. She is in No. 3 Junior High School. Her phone number is 257-6433. We are in the same class. Do you want to be my friend? You can call me, and my phone number is 257-3685.

【解析】

本文虽然内容简单，但作者使用了一些好的短语，为文章增色不少，如be from，twelve years old，a round face like an apple，long and black，No. 3 Junior High School，in the same class，want to do，call me等。而并列句I'm 12 and from England./ You can call me, and my phone number is 257-3685.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。