Question

【题目】【2016江苏连云港】书面表达。

为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了“绿色港城，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以"The Green City , the Healthy Life" 为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意：

(1)词数90 左右，短文开头己给出，不计入总词数;

(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lianyungang, it's our duty to

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lianyungang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It's better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I'll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. (102words)

【解析】

试题分析：短文叙述了“绿色港城，健康生活”的征文活动，所以句子应该用一般现在时，不要遗漏要点，要注意句子的衔接，不能用汉语式的英语，要符合英语的表达习惯。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：As a citizen of Lianyungang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life.And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.用了when引导的时间状语从句，用了一些过渡的短语In my opinion，Firstly, Secondly,In a word增加了文章的亮点。