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5．初三年级学生李雷近来十分焦虑．体育测试即将到来，而他却由于雾霾 （haze weather）频频来袭无法进行户外体育锻炼．他写信给好友Jack寻求帮助．假如你是Jack，请给他写一封信，从锻炼的时间、地点及日常饮食等方面提一些建议，使他保持良好的身体状况．
要求：1．文章中必须包括所有信息；
2．不得使用真实的人名和校名等信息；
3．词数80词左右；
4．开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Li Lei，
I've known about your worries．Here is some advice for you．
Firstly，when haze weather happens/comes，it's better not to do exercise outdoor．If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．
Secondly，haze often gets thinner after the sun shines．So the time from 10 a．m．to 4 p．m．is a good time to exercise．You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious．
Last but not least，improving health is also important．Live a happy life，like eating more fruit and vegetables，and you will have more energy to fight against haze．
I hope my advice can help you．
Yours，
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．如果你需要锻炼，可以选择户内的活动．
if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious这个期间你可以做些户外的活动因为雾霾不是很严重．
because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Dear Li Lei，
I've known your worries．Here is some advice for you．
Firstly，when haze weather happens/comes，it's better not to do exercise outdoor．If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．【高分句型一】（锻炼地点）
Secondly，haze often gets thinner after the sun shines．So the time from 10 a．m．to 4 p．m．is a good time to exercise．You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious．【高分句型二】（锻炼时间）
Last but not least，improving health is also important．Live a happy life，like eating more fruit and vegetables，and you will have more energy to fight against haze．（饮食）
I hope my advice will help you．
                                                   Yours，
                                                      Jack

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．