Question

5．请根据提示以The Person Who has influenced Me Most写一篇80词左右的短文．
提示：我妈妈是对我影响最大的人，她四十多岁，个子高高的，很苗条．她总是我家中起得最早的人，总是她做一日三餐，操持家务，晚上有时还辅导我作业．她自己还要上班，她在一家医院工作．我认为妈妈是世界上最伟大的人之一．
My mother is the person who has influenced me most．
　　She is in her forties．She is tall and slim．She is always the first person to get up in my house，she cooks three meals for us and do the housework，sometimes she helps me with my homework in the evening．She is a doctor and works in a hospital，she works hard．I think my mother is one of the greatest man in the world．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
My mother is the person who has influenced me most．我的母亲是最影响我的人．这是who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词  the person．
 高分句型二
I think my mother is one of the greatest man in the world．我认为我的母亲是世界上最伟大的人之一．这是一个宾语从句，I think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句，one of …．…之一．

解答 The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
　　My mother is the person who has influenced me most．【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】【开头点明主题】
　　She is in her forties．She is tall and slim．She is always the first person to get up in my house，she cooks three meals for us and do the housework，sometimes she helps me with my homework in the evening．She is a doctor and works in a hospital，she works hard【正文部分详细介绍妈妈的情况】．I think my mother is one of the greatest man in the world．【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】【结尾紧扣主题】

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