题目内容
【题目】 自7月1日起,南京市将执行《江苏省电动自行车安全条例》,未戴头盔骑乘电动自行车将属于交通违法行为。请你根据下面的调查数据和文字提示,以 “Helmet is important” 为题,用英语写一篇短文。
调查数据 | 2019 年南京市电动自行车交通事故死亡原因分析 正确佩戴头盔的骑乘人员在交通事故中无一死亡 |
规定 | 未戴头盔将被警告或罚款 20 至 50 元 |
观点 | 针对新条例谈谈你的看法 |
注意:
1. 参考词汇:颅脑受损 brain damage;死亡原因 death cause;
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Helmet is important!
From 1 July, 2020, people in Nanjing must wear helmets when they ride e-bicycles. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Helmet is important
From 1 July, 2020, people in Nanjing must wear helmets when they ride e-bicycles. Otherwise, they will be warned or fined 20 to 50 yuan.
According to a survey on the death causes of people who died from e-bike accidents, 81.6 percent of them died because of brain damage. Among them, 95 percent didn’t wear helmets. On the other hand, for those who wore helmets properly, none of them died. We should learn a lesson from the numbers. It’s necessary for everyone to wear helmets when riding e-bicycles.
In my opinion, it is responsible and wise of Nanjing Government to carry out this new traffic rule.
People will wear helmets in order to avoid being punished. In this way, more people will be protected.
【解析】
1.题干解读:对于写作题考生需认真审题,全面了解写作要求,理清思路,确定短文体裁、框架结构和写作内容。题目要求根据调查数据说明骑乘电动自行车时戴头盔的重要性,属于材料类作文,宜采用“总分总”结构,以第一、三两种人称和一般过去时、一般将来时、一般现在时三种时态展开陈述。