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8.根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信.信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内.所给英文提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名.
假如你叫Liu Ying,你的好朋友Jane考试前总是紧张.尽管她刻苦学习,但一开始考试,她就忘了所有东西.她感觉自己好笨,也为此而感到苦恼.于是她通过邮件向你寻求帮助,请根据她的问题回复邮件.
提示词语:nervous,stupid,clever,achieve,goals,when,attention,if,get
Do you have the same problem as I?
Do you think I am a little stupid?
What can I do when I take an exam?
Hi!Jane,
I'm sorry to hear about your problem and hope I can help.
Sometimes,I have the same feeling as you.I also feel a little nervous before exams.Maybe eveveryone does.So I don't think you are stupid and you are always clever in my mind.
Trust yourself.If you study hard every day,you'll achieve your goals.When you're taking your exam,pay attention to the questions and think over your answers and don't worry about your grades.If you worry too much,it won't help you get good results.
I hope my advice helps.Please write to me again if you need any more help.
Yours,
Liu Ying.

分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是给朋友写一封回复邮件,回复其问题给出建议.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一人称和第二人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1你和我有同样的烦恼吗?
2你认为我有点笨吗?
3考试的时候该怎么办?
常用到的重点短语:
a little 一点儿
trust oneself相信自己
study hard 努力学习
pay attention to 注意…
think over仔细思考
worry about担心
【高分句型】
1.So I don't think you are stupid and you are always clever in my mind.
think后跟上省略了that的宾语从句,从句的否定转移到主句.译成我认为你不笨.
2.If you study hard every day,you'll achieve your goals.
if引导的条件状语从句,遵循主将从现的规则.

解答 Hi!Jane,
I'm sorry to hear about your problem and hope I can help.
Sometimes,I have the same feeling as you.I also feel a little nervous before exams.Maybe everyone does.(你和我有同样的烦恼吗)So I don't think you are stupid and you are always clever in my mind.【高分句型】(你认为我有点笨吗)
Trust yourself.If you study hard every day,you'll achieve your goals.【高分句型】When you're taking your exam,pay attention to the questions and think over your answers and don't worry about your grades.If you worry too much,it won't help you get good results.(考试的时候该怎么办)
I hope my advice helps.Please write to me again if you need any more help.Yours,
Liu Ying

点评 初中英语的作文,着重考察学生连词成句的能力,要在"准"字上下功夫.在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面.在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式.对于中学作文的写作,尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中,写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章,不要出现中式英文.在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子进行默写,考试时就能写出准确地道的作文.

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