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4．假如你是莉莉，准备以"What Can We Do for the Environment"为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿．
内容包括：
1．在购物时用布袋（cloth bag）替代塑料袋（plastic bag）；
2．尽可能地再利用使用过的课本；
3．离开教室应关灯；
4．最好走路或骑自行车上班；
5．简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等．
注意：1．词数：80词左右．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．可根据要点适当发挥，使行文连贯；
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello，everyone．I'm Lily．It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment，and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping．It helps to protect the environment．The second thing we can do，is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can．Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．We should try our best to reduce pollution arid waste．
In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．
Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"What Can We Do for the Environment"为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．在购物时用布袋替代塑料袋．
2．尽可能地再利用使用过的课本；
3．离开教室应关灯；
4．最好走路或骑自行车上班；
5．简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等．
常用到的重点短语：
instead of 代替
as possible as we can尽可能地
forget to do sth 忘了去做某事
turn off 关…
in order to 为了…
try one's best to do sth竭尽全力做某事

【高分句型】
1．The first thing①we can do is ②to use cloth bags③instead of plastic  bags ④when we go shopping．
①we can do作为定语从句，修饰先行词thing，关系词which作为从句的宾语，可以省略．
②动词不定式做表语，与is构成系表结构．
③instead of 代替…而不是…
④when引导的时间状语从句．
2．Also，we should never ①forget to ②turn off the lights③when we leave the classrooms ④in order to save energy．
①forget to do sth 忘了去做某事．
②turn off 关…
③when引导的时间状语从句．
④in order to 为了…，表目的，做目的状语．

解答 Hello，everyone．
     I'm Li Hua．It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment  and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic  bags when we go shopping．【高分句型】It helps to protect the environment．（．在购物时用布袋替代塑料袋）The second thing we can do，is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can．
（尽可能地再利用使用过的课本）Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．【高分句型】（离开教室应关灯）What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．（最好走路或骑自行车上班）We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste．In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．（理由）
Thank you for your listening!

点评 此为材料作文，要仔细审题，抓住重点，将所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，可使用一些表示顺序的词，使论述更明确，更有层次感．还要注意多使用一些委婉的提建议的句型，尽量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥单调．要求语句通顺，语法，词汇，时态正确，书写规范．