Question

3．假定你是你校英语报的小记者，以下两幅图展现了发生在刘林家的生活场景，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿．
内容要求：
1．简要描述两幅图的内容；
2．概述你对两幅图的理解；
3．说明两幅图对你的启示．

注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
It happened in Liu Lin's family．It happened in Liu Lin's family．Twenty years ago，when Liu Lin was a child，his mother helped him wash his feet every day．Twenty years later，Liu Lin grew into a young man．Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day．
What do the pictures tell us？On the one hand，when we were young，our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us．On the other hand，we should always remember what our parents have done for us．When they are growing older，they need our love and care as well．Therefore，it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up．
In my family，my parents also give me great love and care every day．I love my parents from the bottom of my heart．Thus，I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容看图简述刘林家的生活场景，谈谈对你的启示．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称和第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．简要描述两幅图的内容；
2．概述你对两幅图的理解；
3．说明两幅图对你的启示．
常用到的重点短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
take care of 照顾
devote oneself to doing sth 致力于…
thus 因此
pay back 报答
learn from sb向谁学习．
【高分句型】
1．①On the one hand，②when we were young，our parents ③devoted themselves to ④taking care of us．
①on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
②when引导的时间状语从句．
③devote oneself to doing sth 致力于…
④take care of sb 照顾某人．
2．①Therefore，②it is important for us to ③pay our parents back ④after we grow up．
①therefore 连词，因此
②It's+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
③pay back 报答
④after引导的时间状语从句．

解答 It happened in Liu Lin's family．Twenty years ago，when Liu Lin was a child，his mother helped him wash his feet every day．Twenty years later，Liu Lin grew into a young man．Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day．（简要描述两幅图的内容）
   What do the pictures tell us？On the one hand，when we were young，our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us．【高分句型】On the other hand，we should always remember what our parents have done for us．When they are growing older，they need our love and care as well．Therefore，it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up．【高分句型】（概述你对两幅图的理解）
   In my family，my parents also give me great love and care every day．I love my parents from the bottom of my heart．Thus，I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on．（说明两幅图对你的启示）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯