Question

【题目】依据下列表格，帮助Sue写一份自我介绍。

注意：要点要齐全，字数50-60.

姓名	Sue
年龄	15
国籍	美国
班级	七年级三班
学校	No. 1 Middle School
家庭成员	父亲（教师），母亲（医生），姐姐（学生）
其他	会打网球，会跳舞，不会说中文；喜欢听音乐
喜欢的食物	米饭，面条，牛肉
喜欢的课程	语文、美术

提示词：听音乐 listen to music 打网球 play tennis ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】I have a friend called Sue. She is a 15-year-old American girl. She is in Class 3 Grade 7 of No. 1 Middle School. Her father is an English teacher and her mother is a doctor. Her sister is also a student. She can play tennis and dance. But she can't speak Chinese or ride a horse. She likes listening to music, swimming and singing. Her favorite food is noodles, rice and beef. Chinese and art are her favorite subjects.(50 words)

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。根据提纲内容可知用一般现在时，按照提纲要求逐条翻译成英文名字。同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。

【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如a 15-year-old American girl，play tennis and dance，likes listening to music，swimming and singing等。而I have a friend called Sue./ Her sister is also a student./ Her favorite food is noodles, rice and beef.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。