Question

【题目】书面表达：

某英语报开展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress（考试压力）”征文比赛，请你根据图片和表格中提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意：（1）词数80-100左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数

（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名

适当的压力	积极思考，认真学习 按时复习，防止遗忘
过重的压力	无法入睡，非常疲倦 害怕考试，导致失败
应对的措施	合理计划，准备充分 …… (至少2条)

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to go over (review) our lessons on time to remember them. So we can pass the exam easily.

However, if we have too heavy/much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired or sleepy in class. We may fear/be afraid of exams too much and fail in the end.

In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare everything well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in exams. (108words)

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何解决考试带来的压力。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：A little bit of stress can be......；it can remind us to .....；if we have......及we’d better ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要用题目要求的提纲内容。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头是考试带来的压力的好处，接下来介绍考试压力的不利之处，最后指出我们解决考试压力。此处用了remind us to，feel too tired，too heavy stress，in the end，form some good habits, do well in等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。