Question

4．某英文杂志正在举办以"Protect our environment"为主题的征文大赛．假如你是阳光学校（Sun School）初三5班的李敏，请你写一篇短文参赛，文中请先介绍自己（如姓名、班级等），然后谈谈作为中学生，我们可以为保护环境做点什么，并呼吁大家参与到环境保护的行动中来．
提示词语：name，save，energy，recycle，wastes，duty，join
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，we can save as much energy as possible．
句中涉及到短语"as…as possible 尽可能…"，这句话意为：首先，我们可以尽可能多的节约能源．
高分句型二：
In a word，the environment is very important and it's our duty to protect it．
句中涉及到短语"in a word 总而言之"、"it is one's duty to do sth  做…是…的责任"．这句话意为：总而言之，环境非常重要，保护它是我们的责任．

解答 My name is Li Min，a girl from Class 5，Grade 3，Sun School．（自我介绍）
As middle school students，we should do something to protect our environment．First，we can save as much energy as possible．【高分句型一】For example，we can go to school by bike instead of by car．Second，try to recycle wastes such as old newspapers，bottles and cans．Third，we can plant more trees to make our environment greener and cleaner．（保护环境的建议）
In a word，the environment is very important and it's our duty to protect it．【高分句型二】Please join us and take action．（发出倡议）

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