Question

13．初中三年的学习和生活即将结束．在此期间，相信你肯定帮助过别人，也同样接受过别人的帮助．请以Thank You，My_____为题，写一篇不少于60词，意义连贯，逻辑清晰，积极向上的记叙文．
要求：请将题目补充完整，描述对方的形象，记述她/他是如何帮助你的，你将如何表示谢意．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然记得那天我英语成绩低，我将自己藏起来没因为我害羞害怕被嘲笑．
①when作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的the day．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老师，像春天一样，鼓励我带领我走向美好的未来．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的teacher．

解答 Thank You，My Teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何帮助我的）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（如何表示谢意）

点评 牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．