Question

【题目】2017年4月，青海玉树发生了地震（earthquake），家园、学校受到了损坏。一名灾区的学生（Zhuoma）下周将来你们班。她将在你们班学习一年。请根据表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你将如何帮助她，并适当写出自己的想法。

卓玛（Zhuoma）	On weekdays	On weekends
年龄：l3岁 家乡：青海玉树	1．带她参观校园 2．送她学习用品 3．在学习上帮助她 4．．．．．．．	1．请她来家里 2．一起吃饭 3……．

注意：

1、字数要控制在80—100词左右。

2、不要出现你的姓名和学校信息。

3、开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Zhuoma will come to our class next week．She’s from…

Answer 1

【答案】Zhuoma is a 13-year-old girl. She will come to our class next week. She's from Yushu, Qinghai. In her hometown, she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake. She'll study with us for a year. As her new classmate, I'll try my best to help her. When she comes, I'll introduce my friends to her and show her around our school. On weekdays, I'm going to give her some school things. I'm good at English, so I can help her with her English. I'll help her join our English club. Maybe she is lonely on weekends. I can invite her to my home. We'll have dinner together. Then, we can play games or watch TV.

I'll do my best to make her happy and feel at home. In my opinion, all Chinese come from a family. We should help each other.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，介绍如何帮助灾区的学生卓玛。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如try one’s best, because of, show sb around, be good at, help sb with, help sb to do, invite sb to to, do one’s best, feel at home以及in my opinion。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。