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书面表达:
The Change of Women's Status
I left china before liberation. In the old days women were looked
down upon. They couldn't go to school when they were little girls. When
they grew up, only a few of them could find jobs. At home they did
all housework. They washed all the clothes, cooked three meals every day
and cleaned the house.
But now they can go to school and even receive a higher education.
At home, most of them are good mothers and wives. But different from
the past, they can do what the man do.They
make great achievements in every field. What a great change it is!