8.keep 改为keeping 。keeping 和前面的buying构成介词in的宾语

7.正确

6.choose 后面加from

5.better 后面的to去掉。 had better do sth 最好做某事

4.much 改为many 。calories 是calorie (卡路里)的复数

3.Tradition 改为Traditional

2.　　　 have 改为has 。倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语

1.　　　 Choose 改为 Choosing　 。动名词作主语

10.Thirty –five people are reported to be _____ (掩埋)under ground after the accident happened at the mine.

第二节：短文改错(共10小题，每小题1.5分.共15分)

　When I first learned to write in English， I ran into　　　 1. ___

　many difficulties. The main problem was in that I　　　　　 2. ___

　always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything　　 3. __

　into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary.　　　 4. _

　I followed her advice and should put down 100 words　　　 5. __

or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on　　 6. __　　　

　paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.　　 7. __

　One day I wrote a little story and showed to my　　　　　　 8. __

　teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class.　　 9. ___

　They all said the story was a good one. Their word were　　 10. __

9.As is known, one foot equals 12 _____ (英寸).