79. attractively---attractive.　

78. girl前加who或that

77. classmate---classmates　

20. [2013·重庆万州二中下学期期中]

短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，共10分)

　 　以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

　　 此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　 此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　 此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

Recently I've conducted a survey on if girls should　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 76.　　　　

lose weight among my classmate. Most of the students hold the　　 77.　　　　

view that girls should lose weight. In their opinion, girls are slim　　 78.　　　　

are more beautiful and attractively, and they are more confident in　 79.　　　　

their study and work than those who are fat. Therefore, a few of the　 80.　　　　

students have a different opinion. We think it’s a waste of time　　　 81.　　　　

and money. In addition, lose weight may be harmful to their　　　　 82.　　　　

body and mind. After all, anything is more important than　　　　　 83.　　　　

the health. If girls take weight-loss pills and then stop doing that　　 84.　　　　

some day, they will become fatter. So it is no need for young girls　　 85.　　　　

to lose weight as long as they are healthy.

改错：76. if---whether

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者从第十一处起不计分。

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about how we students use the Internet. As we all know, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. We often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends. Beside, we listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.

However, it has its disadvantages. We waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad effect on our studies. What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet do great harm to them. I hope we can make the use of the Internet proper for our studies.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours truly

　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Zhang Hua

改错：

a important　 改为 an important

learning　　 改为 learn

sent　　　　 改为 send

Beside　　　 改为 Besides

listen　　　 后面加 to

that has　　 改为　 which has

do　　　　 改为　 does

them　　　 改为　 us

the use　 　中 the 去掉

proper　　　 改为 properly

19. [2013·浙江省东北三校下学期期中联考]

短文改错 (共10小题：每小题1 分， 共10分)

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每次错误以及修改均限一词；文中共有10处语言错误,

　　　　 　第五行：gradual--- gradually

　　　　 　第六行：T-shirt---- T-shirts

　　　　 　第四行：fly---flew; 去掉a

　　　　 　第三行：us---ourselves; surprising-- surprised

　　　　 　第二行：On--- In； because 加上of