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   Sometimes people give us nicknames in order to be mean or make fun of us, which can really hurt.

   Four Eyes. Metal Mouth. Dumbo. Slow Poke. Crater Face. We’ve all heard kids calling nasty nicknames like these. Maybe you’ve even used similar nicknames on other kids, or been stuck with one yourself.

   A playground bruise or cut usually disappears after a couple of days, but the pain and anger coming from being called a cruel nickname can last a lot longer than that. If you’ve ever picked on another kid by making up or using a tease nickname, or if you’ve ever been on the receiving end of one, you know that names like Fatso, Smelly, and Short Stuff can be very hurtful. Plus, they have a habit of sticking to us like glue!

   People use negative nicknames as a way of keeping someone out of a group, of gaining power over someone, or of making themselves feel more important. You may know a kid in your class who always comes up with nicknames for the other kids. This student likes to feel cool by acting like the official "nicknamer". This can give a student a feeling of power, but that power comes at the cost of making other kids feel bad. Kids who give others hurtful nicknames are often trying to cover up the fact that they really feel bad about themselves.

   Like other kinds of insults(污辱), a cruel nickname can be used to make a kid feel being left out or angry. Sometimes they’re even nastier than most ways of being mean, because they can be so hard to shake off.

3. 附加说明写信的其他目的和问候,作为结尾。

   注意:语言表达要符合英文书写习惯,行文要连贯,叙述要清晰明白。

[学生习作]

Dear Ray,

   I got your information about stamp collecting when I was surfing the Internet yesterday. I’m very glad to know that you can spare some precious stamps for exchange or for sale, for I am a crazy stamp-collector and I like to collect foreign stamps very much. I wonder if you can give more details about them. At the same time, I have some traditional Chinese stamps that we can exchange with each other if possible. Besides, I want to talk about stamp collecting with foreigners. I wish you can help me. Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes!

Yours,

Chen Xin

教师点评:这篇习作写得很好。

   文章按照要求和题目提示内容,全面准确地表达出了有效信息。首先,作者简单描述了自己得知Ray发布信息的过程,然后表达了自己想得到邮票的渴望,并自然地描述了自己的集邮活动,表达了自己想"加强交流合作,共同探讨集邮知识"的愿望。信中应用了许多非常地道的表达方法及一些用得比较好的复合结构,如含有定语从句的复合句:I have some traditional Chinese stamps that we can exchange with each other if possible;含有状语从句的复合句:I got your information about stamp collecting when I was surfing the Internet yesterday等。词汇和句式的使用丰富而富于变化,如:I’m very glad to know that ... 和I wonder if you can give more details about them等。语句或段落间使用了有效的连接成分或灵活的过渡语句, 使行文连贯,过渡自然,如:Besides和At the same time等。文章内容层次分明,脉络清晰。

   全文表达没有词汇和语法方面的使用错误, 语句结构方面表达得十分精彩,这些都充分体现了作者娴熟的表达技巧和较强的英语语言综合运用能力。

   全文成功地达到了预期的写作目的。评卷给14分。

 [ 轻松一刻]   Havaii

Two people were discussing whether the state of Hawaii was pronounced "Havaii"or "Hawaii". So they stood there arguing and arguing, until they decided to ask a person that was walking by. They asked the gentleman, "Excuse me, sir, is Hawaii pronounced 'Havaii’or 'Hawaii’?"

   The gentleman said, "Havaii. "

   As the gentleman was leaving, one of the two said to the gentleman, "Thank you."

   The gentleman said, "You are 'velcome’!"

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