第二节　 写作(满分30分)

One possible version:

　　 As a middle scbool student，it is necessary to build a good relationship witn our teacners，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．

In this case,an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important.In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding,and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind,teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly.Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.

写作评分标准:

第二节　 写作(满分30分)

作为一名中学生，和老师建立良好的师生关系是必要的。请你围绕这个话题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

3.如何才能建立这种关系？

注意:词数120-150左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

As a middle school student,it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachcrs.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　

第二节 写作(满分30分)

　　　 90后出生的学生，思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是一名90后出生的学生刘林，请根据下表中所提供信息以“Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，以消除人们的忧虑。

注意：1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

　　　 2．词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　　 3．演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone!

　　　 The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s”．

　　　 Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed．

　　　 Thank you for your listening!

写作 (One Possible Version)

Good afternoon, everyone!

　　　 The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s”．

　　　 Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed．Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern．

　　　 They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do．Besides, they consider us as lacking in determination, and this is what it takes to do any job well．Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty．They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future．

　　　 However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses．Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams．In addition, we are quick-minded and creative．We can do our work more efficiently．Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced．Please do trust us!

　　　 Thank you for your listening!

(山东省潍坊市诸城一中2011届高三12月阶段测试)

第二节　 书面表达(满分30分)

One possible version

Boys and girls,

　　 Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies. Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donators’ health so we shouldn’t donate our blood to others. But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally.

As we know, donating blood is of great importance. Blood is important to patients, without which many of them can’t survive. And to the youth in the new age, not only is donating blood for free a social responsibility, but also it is the spirit of cooperation and sharing.

We senior high school students who have a better understanding of medical knowledge should set a good example to other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to tell people the benefits of donating blood. Do it now, starting from you and your family.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Students Union

英语作文评分细则

关于大错、小错的问题：

1.小错：单词拼写、冠词、大小写、标点符号错误。

2.大错：搭配错误、词语用错(介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词)、时态、语态、主谓一致、

非谓语动词、句式等错误。

(山东省罗美中学2011届高三11月月考)

第五档(很好)：(25-30分)

很好地完成了试题规定的任务。

　　 -对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。

　　 -语法结构和词汇的选用恰当、丰富。

　　 -语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

　　 -有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

第四档(好)：(19-24分)

较好地完成了试题规定的任务。

-对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。

-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因为因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。

-使用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

第三档(适当)：(13-18分)

基本完成了试题规定的任务。

　　 能描述题中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。

应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

有一些语法结构或词汇方面错误，但不影响理解。

使用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。

第二档(较差)：(7-12分)

未适当完成试题规定的任务。

-能涉及题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。

-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。

-有一些语法结构或词汇方面错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档(差)：(1-6分)

未完成试题规定的任务。

-很少涉及题目所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。

-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。

-较多语法结构或词汇方面错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。

0分

信息未能传达给读者。

未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

One possible version:

Dear Zhang Hua，

　　 I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your last exam.You are not the only one who seems to try his best but endsup with a failure in exams.Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and don’t want to study hard any longer.I’m sure you know that it’s unwise to do so because you might be left far behind.

　　 I was once in the same situation as yours.Failure is the mother of success.In face of failure,what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice. Anyway,Rome is not built in a day.Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success.I truly hope I can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Ming

(山东省临沂市2011届高三上学期期中考试)

第二节　 写作(满分30分)

　 　假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急这一情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血(donate blood for free)。

● 社会上对献血的错误认识；

● 指出献血的意义；

● 开展相关活动。

注意：

1.字数120-150；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头与结尾已为你写好。

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Boys and girls,

Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

6.根据书写质量，将文章分为好、差、较差三个档次，从应得分中减去0-2分。

5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、

美拼写及词汇均可接受。

4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：所写内容、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

3．词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。