Directions:  Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

就学生目前过重的课业负担写一篇文章。文章必须包含以下内容:

·简述学生课业负担;

·造成课业负担过重的原因;

·提出1-2个解决办法。

Guided Writing:  (One possible version)

In recent years there has appeared such a phenomenon. Some students pass the College Entrance Examination and get enrolled in some colleges, but they don’t attend them. Instead, they choose to return to senior high schools to study so as to get a better mark the next year.

Different people hold different attitudes towards the phenomenon. Some think it is worthwhile for them to learn for another year in order to be admitted to a better university. But in my opinion, this is not a wise decision or even it’s a risky business to do so. Firstly, they will waist a lot of precious opportunities that are pursued by their fellow students. Secondly, the colleges they applied for may not get enough students as scheduled. Thirdly, it is obviously a waist of time and money for those students. Last but not least, chances are that they will fail the exam the next year.

Taking into account all these factors, it’s no use spending another year on what we have learned.

17(2011·陕西省咸阳市高三模拟考试一)

第三节  书面表达(满分30分)

假如你叫李华,听说在国外上学的表弟James吸烟成瘾,你很担忧。请给他写一封e-mail,谈谈吸烟的危害并给出戒烟的建议。(可适当发挥,总词数不少于100词)

Dear James,

                                           

                                            

                                            

          

  Yours,

                                  Li Hua

书面表达(满分30分)

Dear James,

Since I heard you had got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried. You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it’s harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it’s hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice. First, choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you’re sure to succeed.

                                 Yours,

                                  Li Hua

18(2011·陕西省西安铁一中高三摸底考试)

2. 120-140个词

   Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[答案]

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and classmates as well as teachers is good. However, there exist some problems: some students in our grade easily lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden. What's worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.

In my opinion, we middle school students should make effort to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as classmates. Second, when we are not feeling good or happy, we can chat with our friends or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Third, after a day's hard work, we can relax by exercising , such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on.

[解析]此文章属于提纲式作文。主要应该抓住关键点,尤其是关键词句:the relationship between us students and classmates as well as teachers、some students in our grade easily lose their temper、they sometimes quarrel with others;还有注意陈述自己的观点:in my opinion。书面表达的批改是分档次的,应该尽可能多用高级词汇及词组,例如:generally speaking、because of、what's worse、It is likely that等,还应该注意句子之间的连贯性,尽量避免单一句式的重叠现象,多使用适当连接词,例如:however、first、second、third等。一切准备工作均是一等作文的必然要求。

16(2011·辽宁省铁岭六校高三第三次联考)

第二节:书面表达(满分25分)

假设有一批英国中学生将来你校就读,校方要求你在开班典礼上介绍一下学校的有关要求。请

按以下要点写一篇发言稿。

l     上学要穿戴整洁

l     上课不迟到、早退

l     保持校园清洁

l     走路靠右行;若要骑车上学,请办自行车许可证

注意:   .

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