10. _______

Key：1．was改为were。2．and改为but。从上下文可知。3．在old之前加an。plano为可数名词。4．could改为couldn’t。根据句意。5．want改为wanted。应用过去式。6．which改为that。先行词为nothing，笑系代词用that。7．把myself改为you。从上下文可知。8．正确。9．student改为蛊udents。10．去掉Paris前的定冠词the。Paris为专有名词，前不加冠问。

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Mrs Brown was walking near a playground. She was a hurry to visit her four grandchildren. She missed them very much, because she had seen them for quite a long time. She was walking while suddenly she saw a ball coming in her direction. She was already in her seventy. Should she kick thc hall to send it back and should she just go past leaving the ball where it was? Finally with greatly care she gave it a kick. The hall went straight out the goal. How wonderful it was! And she happened to have helped won the match. And all her four grandchildren were on team of the winners.

10. _______

Key: 1. Englishman改为Englishmen。2. hand改为hands。3. he改为they。4. for改为for the。5. each改为to eaeh。6. 正确。7. it改为it is。8. manner改为manners。9. look前加should。10. 去掉at。

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Both my parents.was musicians. Neither of them played a musical instrument, and they both sang, and there was lots of music at home. There was old piano at school and I could keep my hands off it! Finally an old teacher in the school recognized that I want to learn, and she gave me some lessons. When I was nine, I played in the end-of-term concert at school. At the age of thirteen, my music teacher said to me, “There is nothing more which I can teach myself. From now on, you need a world class teacher and a top-class piano.” So I went to a school for music student. Then at the age of twenty two I went to the Paris to study the piano.

10. _______

Key: 1. has改为is。2. 去掉the。3.在graduated后加from。4. becomes改为be-came。5. taught改为teaching。6.正确。7. honor改为honors。8. speak改为speaks。9. collect改为collecting。10. 在listening后加to。

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Englishman and Americans do not shake hand as much as we do. Most people shake hands when he meet for first time and are introduced each other. On most occasions (场合) they only greet one another. At social functions (社会活动) it considered good manner to wait for the wonlall to extend her hand first. While shaking hands you look at the person instead of looking at elsewhere.

10. _______

Key; 1. 正确。2.去掉any。3.在can后加to。4.did改为do。5.family改为Jhome。6. subject改为subjects。7. a改为the。8.去掉about。9. and改为or。10. What改为How。

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Mr Wang is my physics tcachcr. Hc has 1.75 meters in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So he is a middle-aged man. Mr Wang graduated Qinghua University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle school teacher. He has becn taught physics for more than 20 years.

He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in physics but also speak English and Russian very well. In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps and listening music. Also, Mr Wang is kind-hearted.

10. _______

Key: 1. on改为for。2.在come前加to。3. had改为have。4. but改为and/so。5.去掉all。6. prepare改为preparing。7.去掉in。8. 正确。9. 在wonderful前加a。10. return改为rcturns。

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Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that 1 get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family-they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.

10. _______

Key; 1. 去掉much。2.去掉wasa。3. watch改为watching。4. unfortunate改为un-fortunately。5. among改为in。6. the改为one。7. am改为was。8. a lot后加of。9. 正确。10. someone改为everyone / everybody。

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Dear Peter,

Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. l’d like very much coute but 1 had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day.

10. _______

Key: 1. 去掉time。2.把第一个a改为an。3. for改为of。It’s very kind of sb. to do...。4. drove改为drive。并列的不定式。5. his改为their。The Smiths,指Smith一家人。6. 正确。7. have改为had过去时。8.在eager后加to。be ea-ger to know...急于知道。9. question改为questions。10.去掉in。在next (last,this, that) year (month, week) 前不用介词。

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Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. 1 was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my fanfily. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any Frogramme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set. Now sotneone at home reads instead.

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