1. _______　　 2. _______　　 3. _______

10. _______

Key: 1. travel改为traveled。2. picked改为pick, suggest后从句应用(should)+动词原形的虚拟。should 可省去。3. possibly改为possible。as...as possible为固定句式。4.去掉but。前边用though。5.正确。6. what改为how。what修饰名词, how修饰形容词或副词。7. Learn改为Learning。动名词做主语。8. they改为you。从下文可知。9.去掉the。knowlcdge不可数。10.在same前加the。the same是固定用法。

10. _______

Key: 1. 去掉more。2. holding改为held。3.正确。4. attend改为attending。5. fin-ish改为finished。6.去掉in。7.在success前加a。8. my改为our。9. winner改为winncrs。10. that改为what。

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A merchant (商人) from Beghada travel at night, Suddenly a voice in the sky suggested hc picked up as many stones as possibly on his way. Though he was rather surprised, but he picked some up. Thc next morning, the sun shone on the stones. All of a sudden, the stones changed into gold. Maybe, you can realize what regretful the merchant was. Learn knowledge is just like this kind of situation. At the moment they don’t know the value of knowledge at all and haven’t devoted to learning the knowledge. Then, you will feel same as the merchant in the future.

10. _______

Key: 1. 在English 前加my。2. schoolmate改为schoolmates。3. that改为whether。4. 正确。5. as改为that。6. 去掉a。7. but改为and。8. calm改为calmed。9. is改为are。10. 去掉often。

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Dear Jim,

I’d like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.

Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours

Li Ping

10. _______

Key: 1. lived前加have。2. lived 前加had。3. all改为both。4. a改为the。5. lived。改为living。6. are改为is。7. helpfully改为helpful。8.正确。9. 去掉of。10.去掉them。

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The day before the speech contest (比赛), English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and cahn down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.

10. _______

Key: 1. 去掉of。2. 去掉第二个go。3. family改为families。4. have改为had。5. As改为With。6.正确。7. university 前加a。8. difficulty改为difficulties。9. designing 改为designed。10. truly改为true。

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1 lived in this city for a few years, but before that I lived with my family in a farm far away from here. Life is very different between the two places, but I like all of them. In a country it is very quiet since there are not many people, lived around. The car is clean and everything that meets your eyes are beautiful. The people in the country seem friendly and helpfully to their neigh-hours. The food is usually cheap. However, I like living in the city too because of there are interesting things to do all the time and you have lots of places to visit them.

7. _______　　 8. _______　　 9. _______

4. _______　　 5. _______　 　6. _______

1. _______　　 2. _______　　 3. _______

10. _______

Key：1．在第二个was后加in。in a hurry匆忙地。2．正确。3．在had后加not。根据上文She missed them ...。4．while改为when。when就在那时。5．seventy改为seventies。in one’s seventies在某人七十几岁时。6．and改为or。7．greatly改为great。with great care小心地。8．out改为into。表“球进了”。9．won改为win。help后接不定式。help (to) do。10．在team前加the。