10. _______

Key：1．把much改为very。much多与-ed的形容词连用。2．that改为what或all。what she wants to do 她想做的事。all (that) =what。3．talks改为talking，为spend b time+ doing...句式。4．去掉weekends前的the。on weekends在周末。5．But改为And。根据下文判断。6．在a lot后加of。a lot of 许多。7．去掉more或把nlore改为much。busier为比较级。8．正确。9．have改为has。team为集合名词，作整体看时，谓语用单数。10．在encourage前加too try one’s best to do尽最大努力去做。

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After I finished the school this year, I began to took for work. Now several month later, I still hadn’t found tbe job that I was interested. Last Sunday nmrning I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr Smith. He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your studies, I may havc a job for you.” I entered his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I will go through the joh hunting talk today and he would take nm on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.

10. _______

Key: 1. 在for后加a。for a long time很久。2. 将that改为which。为非限制性定语从句。3. which改为that。为名词性从句，“就是在现在美洲的地方”。4. 正确。5. drying改为dried。意为“晒干的”。6. At改为In。在……年代用in。7. dan-ger改为dangerous。 8. 去掉smoking前的the。动名词做主语。9. reason改为cause。reason理由，cause导致……的原因，起因。10. bears改为bear。require后的宾语从句应用should+动词的虚拟结构，should可省略。

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Sandy is seventeen years old. And she is much busy. Sbe never has enough time for that she wants to do. Like many other girls about her age, she spends hours on the telephone, talks to her friends. She often goes out on the weekends, and she looks after children for other families to get some money. But, of course, during the school years she herself has a lot homework to do. During the football season, Sandy is more busier than usual She and other pretty girls are cheer leaders. They jump up and down together, cheering when the team have played well. When the team is not playing so well, the girls try their best encourage the players. The cheers are usually not long, but it takes a long time to practise shouting them together.

4. _______　　 5. _______　 　6. _______

1. _______　　 2. _______　　 3. _______

10. _______

Key：1．将before改为ago。before用于过去完成时，ago用过去时。2．去掉traf-fic前的冠词the。traffic指车辆。为不可数名词。3．had后加been。为被动语态。4．suffered改为suffedng。为进行时。5．pmce改为pmces。fall to pieces倒塌。6．正确。7．在long之前加。a。for a long time为固定用法。8．在to。thousands后加of。thousands of为惯用法，表示“数千的”。9．将with改为To。happen to为固定用法。10．根据句意将ever改为nevcr。

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Most Americans don’t like to get advices from melnbers of tbelr famlly. When they are in a trouble and need advice, they write letters for newspapers or magazincs. Most newspapers print letters from readers with problems. Along with the Ietters there have answers written by people who are was first grown in which is now part of the United States. Columbus, Who discovered America, saw the Indians smoking. Soon the drying leaves were transported to Europe where smoking began to catch on. At the late 1800s, the Turks made cigarettes popular. Smoking cigarettes is danger. The US Public Health Service stated that the smoking cigarettes is the reason of lung cancer and several other deadly diseases. The US government now requires that each package of cigarettes bears a special warning against the danger of smoking.

7. _______　　 8. _______　　 9. _______

4. _______　　 5. _______　 6. _______

1

A few days before, I saw an interesting program on TV. It was about the problem of the traffic in our cities. It seemed that a great deal of damage had done by traffic. But now our cities are still suffered from riffs problem. Some buildings are actually falling to piece. It is often faster to walk than to go by car or bus, The problem has been getting worse for long time. This is only one problem among thousands others in our cities. All sorts of terrible things have happened with our cities. And the biggest question is “What can we do about it?” Our roads have ever been designed for such a heavy traffic.

1. _______　　 2. _______　　 3. _______

10. _______

Key:1．将was改为am。从上卜文可知，应用一般现在时。2．去掉for。在three tunes，once，twice等同前不用for。3．将match改为matches。经常看足球赛，故用复数。4．将Play改为Playing。动名词做主语。5．将give改为gives。Pla-ying为主语。6．正确。7．instead后加of。instead of为固定短语。8．important改为importance。此处明显看出应用名词形式。9．在captam前加the。指这队的队长。10．将they改为we。从下文if we want to win the game可知。

10. _______

Key：1．nlitn后加was。was crossmg为谓语动词。2．将above改为under。此句意为“从桥上往桥下看”，故above不符。3．quiet改为quietly。应用副词修饰动词watch。4．pushed改为pulled。push推。pull拉。5．将on改为at。at the end of为固定用法。6．threw后加it。it指fish。7．late改为later。表示“几分钟后”。8．other改为another。9．将S。改为Then。Then表示“之后，后来”，并非表示因果关系。10．正确。

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My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes tls grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.