增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class wonthe 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the srd. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all tryingto do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we haddone.

I am looking forward to receive your letter.

Yours,

Li Ping

With limited space for parks and gardens, architects and city planners often find it challenging to include greenery in neighborhoods in cities. One creative solution is to grow plants on unused areas like walls and rooftops. It’s a popular idea, and now rooftop gardens and green walls have been sprouting up（大量冒出） in cities around the world.

There are many benefits of having green spaces to the urban landscape. Adding gardens to rooftops or walls can create a pleasant environment — what was once a gray cement（水泥） wall can become a colorful, blooming garden. The CaxiaForum art gallery in Madrid, Spain, is a famous example — one of its walls is covered with 15,000 plants from over 250 different species. In other cities, green walls are being used more functionally, to cover up construction sites and empty buildings and to decorate the lobbies of office buildings.

Using plants to cover walls and rooftops can also keep cities cooler in the summer. Buildings and roads absorb the sun’s heat and hold it, causing a building or neighborhood to stay warmer longer. Plants, on the other hand, provide an enormous amount of shade. There is evidence that growing a roof or wall garden can lower a building’s energy costs.

In New York City, public schools plant rooftop gardens that can reduce heating and cooling costs. In addition to saving the school money, teachers and parents love the gardens because of their educational value — it’s a fun and healthy way for their kids to investigate the world around them. “For the children, it’s exciting when you grow something edible（可食用的）,” said Lauren Fontana, principal of a New York public school.

Rooftop gardens and green walls may require a bit more effort to grow and maintain. However, hard work always brings rewards, and with green spaces, the rewards are plentiful.

活动目的 （走进中国诗词，感受传统文化……）

活动内容 （诗歌诵读、古诗词欣赏……）

活动体验 （……）

注意：

词数80左右；

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

The audience sat quietly while he made his way across the stage 【2】 his chair and began his play. But this time, 【3】 went wrong. Just as he finished the first part, one of the strings on his violin 【4】(break). We thought that he would have to stop the concert. But he didn’t. 【5】, he waited a moment, closed his eyes and then signaled the conductor to begin again.

【6】 (power) and pure, his performance attracted all the attention.

Of course, anyone believes 【7】 impossible to play a harmonious work with just three strings. I know that, and you know that, but that night Itzhak Perlman refused 【8】 (know) that.

When he finished, people rose and cheered.

【9】 (smile), he wiped the sweat and said, “You know, sometimes it is the artist’s task to find out how much music you can still make with 【10】 you have left.”

“In the food industry, no venture capital (VC, 风险投资) will even look at you until you’ve hit a million in sales. As a fresh hand in business, unless you’re independently wealthy, you will likely need to raise some money before then,” Lisa complained. So few businesses approached VC firms at the beginning. It was no exception with her. Thus, she turned to a new financing tool at hand, crowdfunding, to raise money from the crowd who’d like to take a bet on her company.

But for a company, it didn’t make sense to seek investments when all they had was an idea and a few months of consumer testing data. The food market is extremely competitive. No investor would put money behind a totally unproven new super food product founded by a bunch of twenty-somethings. “But we had a story. And crowds love stories.” Lisa said delightedly. So she put together an online crowdfunding campaign, explaining how she began working with this amazingly nutritious plant in the Peace Corps and then started selling it in the U.S. to support the poor in the West Africa.

On the online platform where they were to raise the money, a friend convinced them to change their goal from $20,000 to $50,000. Lisa stayed up all night worrying they wouldn’t hit it. But they reached $24,000 in 24 hours and ended their funding with $53,000. Seeing the number, Lisa said, “Thank you! To my crowd and for your belief!”

【1】Why couldn’t Lisa get investments in a traditional way?

A. She lacked confidence in business.

B. Her food company was in poor condition.

C. VC demanded too much in choosing partners.

D. Consumers were not satisfied with her new products.

【2】According to the passage, crowdfunding ________.

A. ensures the investors a good return

B. aims to help badly managed companies

C. attracts more people to become investors

D. helps startups deal with money shortages

【3】The underlined word “twenty-somethings” refers to ________.

A. twenty impractical ideas B. young people over twenty

C. twenty inexperienced partners D. a company with twenty branches

【4】Which of the following best explains Lisa’s success?

A. Great minds think alike. B. Honesty is the best policy.

C. Many hands make light work. D. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

“Spare me!’’ begged 【3】 poor Mouse. “Please let me go and some day I 【4】 ( repay) you.” The Lion was much 【5】 (amuse) to think that a Mouse could ever help him. 【6】 he was generous and let the Mouse go.

Some days later, while hunting in the forest, the Lion was caught in a hunter’ s net. Unable to free 【7】, he filled the forest 【8】 his angry roaring(咆哮).

The Mouse knew the voice and quickly found the Lion 【9】 ( struggle) in the net. She gnawed (咬) the ropes until it parted, and soon the Lion was free.

“You laughed 【10】 I said I would repay you,” said the Mouse. “Now you see that even a Mouse can help a Lion.”

The key to becoming an effective leader is not to focus on making other people follow, but on making yourself the kind of person they want to follow. 【1】_______ It takes time to become a trustworthy leader.

As you prepare yourself to become a better leader, use the following guidelines to help you grow:

Don’t be self-centered.

The truly great leaders are not in leadership for personal gain. 【2】________ Perhaps that is why Lawrence Bell remarked, “A man who cannot bother to do little things for others are unlikely to become a good leader.”

【3】________

Rare is the effective leader who didn’t learn to become a good follower first. That is why a leadership institution such as the United States Military Academy teaches its officers to become effective followers first.

Work with excellence.

No one respects and follows mediocrity(平庸). Leaders who earn the right to lead give their all to what they do. They bring into play not only their skills and talents, but also great passion and hard work. 【4】_______

Give your power away.

What makes leadership so special is that you become a better leader by sharing whatever power you have, not by saving it all for yourself. 【5】________ If you use your power to empower others, your leadership will extend far beyond your grasp.

A. Become a good follower first.

B. You are meant to be a river, not a pool.

C. They lead in order to serve other people.

D. Leaders help people to reach their potential.

E. Leadership isn’t learned or earned in a moment.

F. Leadership is influence, nothing more, nothing less.

G. They perform on the highest level of which they are capable.

Think Green. Think about the environment as you live your life. If you turn off lights and TV when leaving the room, you’ll save energy. 【1】.

Shop Green. Shopping is fun, but buying things you don’t need is wasteful and even bad for the earth. 【2】. And whenever possible, buy things locally made instead of those shipped from far away.

Dress Green. What really matters is not the colour. 【3】. So look for products made from environmentally friendly (环保的) materials.

【4】. What’s better than learning about the environment? 【5】. It can be as simple as using both sides of a piece of paper before you recycle it

A. Before you buy something, ask yourself how much you will use it.

B. Study Green.

C. It’s how the clothes were made.

D. You may care more about the qualities of the clothes.

E. Save it while you learn.

F. If you take shorter showers, you will save water.

G. Recycle more.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

The other day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.

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【1】Who are likely to join Fitness Zone?

A. People who have health problems. B. People who are good at training others.

C. People who need a tailor - made suit. D. People who want to keep fit.

【2】What does the underlined phrase “look your best” mean?

A. Look in the mirror. B. Try your best to see.

C. Look more confident. D. Be in excellent condition.

【3】What is not offered in our program?

A. Group yoga classes. B. The best fitness equipment.

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