Question

【题目】下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class wonthe 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the srd. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all tryingto do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we haddone.

I am looking forward to receive your letter.

Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】1.something more→去掉more

2.holding→held

3.attend→attending

4.finish→finished

5.broke in →去掉in

6.really ∧success→a或success→successful

7.my→our

8.winner→winners

9.that→what

10.receive→receiving

【解析】1.句意：我想告诉你关于我们学校运动会的一些事情。此处并无比较的意思，故把something more→去掉more。

2.句意：运动会在十月六日被举行。句子用一般过去时态的被动语态，故把holding→held。

3.句意：有1000多学生和老师参加运动会。现在分词做后置定语，表主动，故把attend→attending。

4.句意：他以12.6秒完成100米比赛，并打破校记录。句子是并列谓语，用一般过去时态，故把finish→finished。

5.句意：打破校记录。break in破门而入，故把broke in →去掉in。

6.在success前面加a，表示一件成功的事；be 动词后面用形容词作表语，故really ∧success→a或success→successful。

7.句意：尽我们最大的努力。故把my→our。

8.句意：尽管我不是冠军之一，但我因为我们做的而自豪。One of +名词复数，故把winner→winners。

9. 我因为我们做的而自豪。介词of后面是what引导的宾语从句，其双重作用，故把that→what。

10.固定搭配：look forward to +sth./doing sth.，故把.receive→receiving。