9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间变换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在——青夏教育精英家教网——

9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间变换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My dear friends，today I'd like to tell you something that was happened yesterday afternoon，where a ceremony was held for our coming 18-year-old birthday．At first，we make an oath（誓言） that as grown-ups we should have sense of duty for our society．Then we expressed our sincerely thanks to our parents and teachers if they have been educating us for years．After that，one of the teacher delivered an inspiring speech，conveyed her good wishes for us．At the end，we put on wonderful performances，singing and dancing．With so much learned from the activity，I will bear them in mind all my life．

8．Three years after Mo Yan won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012，Chinese writers have once again managed to achieve international（61）recognition （recognize）．Chinese children's fiction writer Cao Wenxuan，a professor of Chinese literature at Peking University，（62）was awarded（award） the Hans Christian Andersen Prize on April 4，2016，becoming the first Chinese author（63）to win（win） the highest international award for an author of children's books．
For Cao，China's real society supplies him（64）with so many vivid and unique stories，（65）whichwould be very fresh to children of other countries．All of his stories are set in China，all of them are Chinese stories，（66）and/butat the same time they are also the stories of humankind．"What I tell are true stories that can be read as stories for all human beings．I suppose that's（67）whyI'm winning．I don't write for a certain audience．When I write，I consider only the language，style and（68）artistic（art） nature of my words，"Cao said．
Cao wishes that the world would（69）gradually（gradual） look at China's literature with a more fair and open attitude，and that Chinese authors would make an effort to use a language（70）appreciated（appreciate） by the entire world．

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When I turned 18last July，I decided to learn driving．My brother volunteers to teach me，but he lacked of patience．Whenever I made the mistake he would get angry with me．I felt such discouraged that I wanted to give up．Before knowing what I was thinking，my friend Torn encouraged me learn in a driving school．I followed his advice and under the guidance of my coach，I regained confidence．With time goes on，I found driving not only interesting but also very easily．At last，I passed the driving test at the first attempt．At that moment，I got really exciting and could hardly keep back my tear．

6．A 13-year study of early childhood development（61）made（make） by Harvard University has shown that，by the age of three，most children have the big potential（62）to understand（understand） about 1000words-most of the language they will use in ordinary conversation for the rest of their lives．
Furthermore，research has shown that while every child is born with a natural curiosity．It all declines （63）greatly （great）during the second and third years of life．Researchers say that the human personality （64）is formed（form）during the first two years of life，and during the first three years children learn the basic skills they will use in all their later learning both at home（65）andat schoo1．
（66）It is generally acknowledged that young people from poorer socio-economic backgrounds tend to do less well in our education system．As a result of the research evidence of the （67）importance（important）of the first three years of a child's of life，a pilot program（68）that/which focused on parents as the child's first teachers started in the US．As the program shows，working with the family，rather than bypassing the parents，（69）is（be）the most effective way of （70）helping（help）children get off to the best possible start in life．

5．A few years ago，SARS （61）brokeout in the mainland of China，causing some people （62）to be killed （kill）．And some nearly got close to death．The situation was so severe that there was （63）no time to debate who is to blame．The most important thing for the government to do is to find out the（64）cause of this deadly disease．They invited all the most（65）experienced（experience） experts in this field to discuss and quite a few suggestions were put forward．Some of the top experts then tested them to see（66）whether/ifthey were available．Doctor Zhong Nanshan chose one patient who was seriously ill and had little hope （67）of picking up and had the new medicine tested on him．（68）To his great joy，this patient recovered!He made his way to his office and telephoned the top official，（69）telling（tell） him this exciting news．For convenience，he moved to live in his office．His method did make sense．Not soon after that，the （70）otherhospitals also controlled this terrible disease and kicked it out finally．

4．One day a young man was standing in the middle of the town proclaiming（宣告） that he had（61）the most beautiful（beautiful） heart in the whole valley．A large crowd（62）gathered（gather），and they all admired his heart for it was perfect．
Suddenly，an old man appeared and said，"Why，your heart is not nearly as beautiful as（63）mine．"The crowd and the young man looked at the old man's heart，which was full of scars．It had places where pieces had been removed and other pieces put in，but they didn't fit quite right，and there were several jagged（锯齿状的） edges．In fact，in some places there were deep gouges（沟槽） where whole pieces were（64）missing（miss）．
The young man laughed．"Comparing your heart with mine，mine is perfect and yours is a mess of scars．"
"Yes，"said the old man，"Yours looks perfect（65）butI would never trade with you．You see，every scar represents a person to（66）whomI have given my love．I tear out a piece of my heart and give it to them，and often they give me a piece of their heart that fits into the empty place in my heart．But because the pieces aren't exact，I have some rough edges，which I cherish，because they remind me of（67）thelove we shared．Sometimes I have given pieces of my heart away，and the other person hasn't returned a piece of his or her heart（68）tome．These are the empty gouges．Although these gouges are painful，they stay open，（69）reminding（remind） me of the love I have for those people．So now do you see（70）whattrue beauty is？"

3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Two men were traveling together while a bear suddenly met them．One of them climbed up into the tree．The other，seeing that he must be attacked，immediate lay on his back on the ground．When the bear came up，feeling him with his nose and smelt him all over，he held breath．The bear soon left him，for it's said that a bear won't touches a dead body．When he was gone，the other travelers went down from the tree．And he asked his friend that the bear had whispered to his ear．"He gave me a piece of advice，"his companion replied．"Never to travel with a friend who deserts you in the face of danger．"

2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
As the old saying go，"East，west，home's best．"I lived in a house in countryside．There's a big living room，three bedrooms，a kitchen and a washroom in it．Some trees and flowers are around my house．The air is really clean．And I often hear birds sung．
There have four people in my family．They're my parents，my sister and I．We're helpfully and friendly．And they always get on well with each other．
I'm happy I have a good family．I will do how I can to help do more housework and farm works．I'll study more harder than ever before so that I can make more money in the future．With our effort，I'm sure my home will be better and better．

1．The machine might break down someday in the future，____，you can dial this number for help．（　　）

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As it is known to us，fewer and fewer students do sports regularly，what makes them weak and easily tired．
There are many reasons about this．First of all，some of the students complained that they have too many homework，resulting in less time to take exercise．Beside，some of them think that it is very difficulty for them to keep doing exercise，because it is a very hard thing．
Because lack of physical activities，many students are in poor health．I suggest that our school must take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports．For us students，no matter what busy we are，it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise．

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