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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单间的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It’s not easy for us to accept the fact which we are going to leave our beloved school. However, we are looked forward to our future life. Last night, my friends and I walk around our school talking about the funny things that had been happened in the past three years. Suddenly, I got an idea. I said to him we should make a deal that we could get together here four years late. My friends were so exciting about it, and they agreed with me. I started to think about what I would become in the future. I may becoming a teacher, or a doctor. I think deal will help us keep in touch to each other.

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【解析】这里含有一个同位语从句，引导词在从句中不作任何成分，也没有实际意义，所以用that。

表示现在正在进行的动作，用现在进行时。

发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时。

“有趣的事情”和“发生”之间是主动关系，所以用主动语态。

句意：我对他们说我们之间应该有一个交易，四年以后再次在这里聚会。所以him改成them。

表示“四年以后”，应该说four years later。

V+ed修饰人，v+ing修饰物，这里修饰人，所以用v+ed形式。

情态动词之后用动词原形。

特指这个交易，所以用定冠词。

Keep in touch with是固定用法，意思是与……保持联系。