Question

【题目】请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。

Some parents tend to look into their children’s school bags, diaries and even their chat records, which is very common in their daily life.

要求：

(1) 就此材料发表你的看法；

(2) 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

(3) 词数不少于60;

(4) 在答题卡上作答。

Answer 1

【答案】

As we know, some parents often look into their children’s school bags, diaries and even chat-on-line records. I fully understand what they are concerned about. They are actually worried about that the kids may get into some trouble. On the other hand, the parents have probably learned some horrible stories about other teenagers from their personal records.

However, I don’t think it is a proper way to do so because the kids not only need respect but also are expected to be respected. A good relation is based on respecting and trusting each other.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文要求结合材料，按要求用英文写作，内容是以英语短文出现，要求考生读懂材料，看懂材料的主旨是一些年轻人对父母的不尊重，要求（1）就此材料发表你的感想;（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点;在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

【亮点说明】半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的英语提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语，如 look into，concerned about，get into some trouble，is based on，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，如I don’t think it is a proper way to do so because the kids not only need respect but also are expected to be respected. ，运用了not only...but also的句型，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，如On the other hand，However，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。