题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你班的留学生Charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回。你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀,作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件:
1.品牌:Gillette: 2.价格:30美元左右。 参考词汇:剃须刀shaver
注意: 1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Charles,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Charles,
I haven’t seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won’t be long before we meet again, isn’t it?
Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father’s birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it back when you come back, and I will pay you back for that. Thank you very much.
Looking forward to your coming soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇书信类作文,请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件:品牌:Gillette;2.价格:30美元左右。需要注意: 词数100左右:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
亮点说明:本文是一篇简洁明了的书信类作文,最开始的一段进行了问候,第二段才真诚的说出来了自己的要求,文章通顺,时态用的比较好。用了do sb.a favor固定搭配来写出帮忙。用了look forward to,pay sb.back等固定搭配让文章更加出彩。用了when 引导的时间状语从句,和多种复合句。感情真挚,用了书信类作文该用的格式,是一篇较为不错的书信类小作文。