题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华，今年将要参加高考。你的老师和父母对你大学专业的选择提出异议，为此你很苦恼。请你根据提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Bob写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法，并征求笔友的建议。
1.父母的建议：法律专业（就业前景好）；
2.老师的建议：外语（充分发挥自己的语言天赋）；
3.你的想法：……
2．注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I am at a loss nowadays. ________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
I am at a loss nowadays. My teacher and my parents have different opinions about my major in college. On the one hand, my parents say I should choose law as my major, who think that our society is in great need of experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation. On the other hand, my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language, which will dig out my potential better. Compared to their opinions, I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business, let alone make more money.
What should I do?
I am looking forward to your advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇邮件，文章内容要点已经给出，同学们在写邮件过程中应该注意几点：
1.邮件的格式正确性，信件开头和结尾格式较为固定，但根据题干要求，写信对象的不同可稍作调整。例如本题中，收信人为Bob,落款人为李华。
2.写邮件一般开门见山，交代写邮件的原因，便于读信人了解邮件重点。在本篇文章中，写邮件的目的在于向笔友寻求专业选择的建议，所以文章应该亮出写作的中心意图。
3.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，既满足题目要求又能把内容表达清楚。在本文写作中，尤其在罗列父母和老师的建议和原因时，首先注意使用合适的连词，进行分点说明，一般先叙述建议，后说明清楚原因。
【范文亮点】
1. 作者在论述题干两个要点，即父母和老师分别给予自己的专业建议的时候，采用On the one hand.....On the other hand的结构，使文章结构清晰，要点明确，一目了然。
2. 文章使用定语从句“my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language, which will dig out my potential better. ”
3. 文章使用了at a loss，in great need of，specialize in，have the gift for，dig out，Compared to，be ready to以及let alone等高级词汇或短语。
