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9.下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
     2.每处错误及其修改均公限一词;
     3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
English is my favorite subject and I'd love the opportunity to improve my English by studying abroad.My spoken language is excellent so I am afraid my writing is not as good.My parents had promised if I am accepted into program,they will get me a teacher for after-school writing lesson.Study abroad will not only improve my English but also gives me a better understanding of customs and cultures in the West.I watch for a lot of English movies but I think life is different from that the movies show.Belonging to a debating club,I'm used to speaking in front of others people.This can prove quite usefully if I have to give talks while I'm abroad.

分析 本文作者主要讲述了自己想通过出国留学来提高英语水平;作者口语很好,但是不擅长英语写作,因此父母答应他,如果他能抓住这次出国留学机会,他们将找一位老师给他上课外写作课;作者认为:出国留学不仅将提高他的英语水平,而且还会让他更好地了解西方的风俗以及文化;作者也看很多英语电影,但他认为生活不同于电影所表演的东西;由于作者参加了一个辩论俱乐部,这使得他习惯于在别人面前讲话,所以他还认为,这将对他在外国必须要做演讲时有用处.

解答 English is my favorite subject and I'd love the opportunity to improve my English by studying
 
abroad.My spoken language is excellent so I am afraid my writing is not as good.My parents had
                                                            but                                                                          have
promised if I am accepted into∧program,they will get me a teacher for after-school writing lesson
                                           the                                                                                       lessons
Studyabroad will not only improve my English but also givesme a better understanding of customs
Studying                                                                     give
and cultures in the West.I watch for a lot of English movies but I think life is different from thatthe
                                                                                                                                         what
movies show.Belonging to a debating club,I'm used to speaking in front of otherspeople.This can 
                                                                                                                   other
prove quite usefullyif I have to give talks while I'm abroad.
                  useful
1.将so改为but    考查连词的用法    分析句意可知,此处表达的是转折关系;即:我的口语很好,但是恐怕我的写作就没那么好了;故用but
2.将had改为have  考查时态    由于此处并不是发生在过去某时间之前的动作,故不能使用过去完成时;根据该主句之后的从句使用了一般现在时可知,此处应使用现在的某种时态,即改为现在完成时;故用have
3.在program之前加the    考查冠词的用法     此处的名词program(计划,安排)特指上文提到的"通过出国留学提高我的英语水平";故用the
4.将lesson改为lessons      考查名词的单复数   本句的意思是:他们将找一位老师给我上课外写作课;其中的写作课应不止上一节;故用lessons 
5.将Study改为Studying     考查动名词的用法   由于Study abroad"出国留学"是动词短语,而在本句中作的是主语,故应将其改为动名词短语
6.将gives 改为give     考查时态的一致性      此处的并列连词词组"not only…but also…"用来连接两个谓语,故句子的谓语在形式上应保持一致;由于本句含有助动词will,故其后的动词应使用动词原形
7.去掉for   考查动词的用法    由于watch是及物动词,所以其后可以直接跟宾语;故去掉for
8.将that改为what     考查连接代词的用法    此处在句中作介词from的宾语,故为宾语从句,意为:但我认为生活不同于电影所表演的东西;由于该从句缺少宾语"所演的东西",而that不作任何成分,也没有意义,只起连接作用;故改为what
9. 将others改为other    考查形容词的用法     others 的用法相当于复数名词,不能用作定语,表示的意思是"不具体的某些其他东西"; 此处是用来修饰名词people,意为:其他的人;故用形容词other
10.将 usefully改为useful   考查形容词的用法    本句的意思是:如果我必须要在国外演讲,这可以证明是非常有用的;句中prove"证明是;结果是"用作连系动词;故此处用形容词

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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C.His parents were not fond of music.
D.He modeled himself after his grandfather.
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A.Expectations of his parents.
B.The financial crisis of the family.
C.His ambition for a business career.
D.His dissatisfation with the college.
61.It was possible for the author to go to Europe to study music becauseD.
A.he kept practicing music
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D.his financial condition was improved
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A.Whaterver you do,you must do it well.
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C.Whoever you are,you should follow your inner voice.
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18.All you have is what you bring with you
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"I'll be right back."she said.
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I didn't realize she was just trying to amuse herself.So I stood there,ashamed and embarrassed.
By the time my mom returned,I was angry."You left me here with no money!This lady asked me for the money,and I had nothing to give her I"
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"It's Okay."he announced."There's nothing to worry about."
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I often told my students,"When you go into the wilderness,the only thing you can depend on is what you take with you."And essentially,the wilderness is anywhere but your home or office.So take money.Pack a light bulb.Be prepared.
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 D.The boy's mother was away for something else.
60.Why was the boy angry with his mother?B
 A.His mother left him alone.
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 C.His mother forgot to buy something.
 D.He had just quarreled with the cashier.
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 A.He was always well-prepared.
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