假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mr．Sadler，
I'm writing to express my interest for the tourist guide position offering in your advertisement．I've learned English for so long that can communicate with native speakers of English without difficult．What's more，I've worked as a guide ago and know all the tourist attractions in my hometown very well．
I'11be available during the winter vacation，from Feb．10to March 10，but I don't have any problem working evenings and weekends．As for the best places to visit，the first two that comes into my mind are Qufu，Confucious'birthplace，and Weishan Lake，a largest lake in North China．
If you need further informations about me，here is for my email address：sdjnlihua@163．com．
Thank you for your consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

分析文章大意：本文是一封求职信，作者对导游这一职位比较感兴趣．作者学习英语很长时间，可以和当地人毫无困难地交流，而且，以前曾经做过导游，对自己家乡的旅游景点比较熟悉．

解答 I'm writing to express my interest for the tourist guide position offering in your advertisement．I've learned English for so long
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∧that can communicate with native speakers of English without difficult．What's more，I've worked as a guide ago and know
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all the tourist attractions in my hometown very well．

I'11be available during the winter vacation，from Feb．10to March 10，but I don't have any problem working evenings and weekends．
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As for the best places to visit，the first two that comes into my mind are Qufu，Confucious'birthplace，and Weishan Lake，a largest lake in North China．
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If you need further informations about me，here is for my email address：sdjnlihua@163．com．
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Thank you for your consideration．

1．for--in  考查介词搭配．对…感兴趣，一般用介词in．
2．offering--offered 考查非谓语动词．本句中，分词作后置定语，修饰position，position和offer是被动关系，所以用过去分词．
3．在that与 can中加入I．考查句子结构．本句中含有so…that…句型，that后是结果状语从句，that不充当任何成分，因此从句中缺少主语，根据上下文可知应该是"我"．
4．difficult--difficultly 考查词性转换，without是介词，后面应该是名词．
5．ago--before 考查副词，ago需要与一段时间连用，比如 one year ago，如果没有一段时间，表示以前，则应该用before．
6．but--and，考查并列连词，前后之间不存在转折关系，而是并列关系，所以用and．
7．comes--come 考查主谓一致．前面的主语是关系代词that，that代指the first two，所以谓语动词应该用come．
8．a--the，考查冠词，在形容词最高级前面一般用定冠词the．
9．informations--information 考查名词单复数． information是不可数名词，所以不用复数形式．
10．for去掉考查介词搭配．句意为：这是我的邮箱地址，不需要for．