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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉最一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In our life，we often regret what we did and which we couldn't do．Actually，it doesn't benefit us at all．As for most of us，we missed many chance to earn more money，to get a high position and to realize our dreams．We often regret that we don't seize those opportunities，thus feel upset．Although we do know regretting the Past is no benefit，but we still can't help doing it
To avoid the problem below，we need to pay more attention to what you are doing now，making us busier and having no time to recall the past．Moreover，we'd better set reasonably goals one by one．Only by doing so can we struggle for our future better．

分析 生活中，我们总会为我们做过或没做到的事感到遗憾．实际上，这对我们没有好处．大多数人都遗憾自己没有抓住机会，去赚更多的钱，得到更高的职位，为此伤心难过．尽管我们都知道遗憾过去于事无补，但还会情不自禁．为了避免这些问题，我们要把精力放到我们现在做的事情上，活在当下．只有这样我们才有美好的未来．

解答 In our life，we often regret what we did and which we couldn't do．Actually，
                                                                 what
it doesn't benefit us at all．As for most of us，we missed many chance to earn more money，
                                                                                                chances
to get a high position and to realize our dreams．We often regret that we don't seize those opportunities，thus feel upset．
            higher                                                                                      didn't                                                 feeling
Although we do know regretting the Past is∧no benefit，but we still can't help doing it
                                                              加of                去掉
To avoid the problem below，we need to pay more attention to what you are doing now，
                                above                                                             we
making us busier and having no time to recall the past．Moreover，we'd better set reasonably goals one by one．
                                                                                                                           reasonable
Only by doing so can we struggle for our future better．
1．which改为what．题干中we couldn't do是用来作regret的宾语从句，从句中do缺少宾语，要用what来连接．
2．chance改为chances．题干中many修饰可数名词chance，要用复数．
3．high改为higher．句意表达的是暗含比较，前面的more给出了暗示．
4．don't改为didn't．句意表达的是过去的情况，要用一般过去时态．
5．feel改为feeling．题干中feel用来作结果状语，要用现在分词形式．
6．加of．短语搭配，be of+名词，表示事物的特指或属性．
7．but去掉．although不能和but搭配使用．
8．below改为above．逻辑错误，句意表达的是为了避免以上问题．
9．you改为we．逻辑指代错误，句意表达的是我们要注意我们现在做的事．
10．reasonably改为reasonable．题干中是用来修饰名词goals，要用形容词形式．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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7．下面是一段短文，请你对其进行修改．文中共有10 处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
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?Japanese soy sauce （酱油）		Instructions
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?Let the rice cool down．
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?Put a little wasabi and soy sauce in a small dish．
?Serve the sushi to your friends．It goes well with green tea．
Attention
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Product Operating
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1．Place the charging home base
Note：Put the charging home base against the wall and remove obstacles around it．
2．Charge the robot in either way as shown below：
A．Plug into an outlet（插座）；
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Note：
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A．Make sure the power switch is on；
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B．Press the CLEAN button on the remote control．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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     2．每处错误及其修改均公限一词；
     3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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