题目内容
5.近年来,桂林开展了"绿色出行"(Green Transportation)计划,向市民提供了大批量的公共自行车.学校将举办以此为主题的演讲比赛,请你以"Let's Ride Bicycles"为题,撰写一篇演讲稿,主要内容包括:1.表明观点:倡导"绿色出行"
2.简述倡导"绿色出行"的理由(如:环境保护,有益健康等)
要求:1.可适当增加细节使行文连贯 2.书写规范,卷面整洁 3.字数:100词左右 (开头已给,不计入总词数)
Good afternoon,everyone!
分析 本次作文要求根据近年来,桂林开展了"绿色出行"(Green Transportation)计划,向市民提供了大批量的公共自行车.学校将举办以此为主题的演讲比赛,请以"Let's Ride Bicycles"为题,撰写一篇演讲稿. 要点包括:1.表明观点:倡导"绿色出行"2.简述倡导"绿色出行"的理由(如:环境保护,有益健康等)
故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求.
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯.其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力.例如:非谓语动词的用法bringing great convenience to our life,riding bicycles is a good solution.with the improvement of people's living standards,environmentally friendly,be beneficial to,in response to,take the responsibility等词汇及As is known to all,However,As far as I'm concerned,For one thing,For another,What's more,Therefore等连接词.
解答 Good afternoon,everyone!
As is known to all,with the improvement of people's living standards,cars have become a popular means of transport,bringing great convenience to our life.(高分句型一 )However,they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems?As far as I'm concerned,riding bicycles is a good solution.(高分句型二)For one thing,bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving.For another,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas.What's more,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.(高分句型三)
Therefore,in response to the government's call----Green Transportation,let's ride bicycles!Let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us!
Thank you!
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.