题目内容
14.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多2处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life.I generally travel by train and bus.It is both cheaper and safe.But this was a short journey.In the beginning I did not feel very happily,but this feeling did not last longer.The journey was very exciting.I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud.The views of mountains,fields and rivers were interested.I enjoyed my short and comfortably journey very much.This experience has shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.
分析 本文主要讲述作者第一次乘飞机的感受.刚开始感觉不舒服,随后发现下面的山、田地和河流的风景很有趣.这次经历显示了乘飞机旅行是最安全的旅行方式.
解答 During the weekend I traveled by air∧the first time in my life.I generally travel by train and bus.It is both cheaper and safe.But this was a short journey.In the beginning I did not feel very happily,but this feeling did not last longer.The journey was very exciting.I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud.The views of mountains,fields and rivers were interested.I enjoyed my short and comfortably journey very much.This experience has shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.
详解:
1.加for 考查介词.for the first time意为"第一次",是固定搭配.
2.and改为or 考查连词.train和bus之间是选择关系而非并列关系,用连词or.
3.safe改为safer 考查形容词比较级.both…and…意为"两者都…",作为关联并列连词,它通常应连接两个相同性质的句子成分,此处都是比较级.
4.happily改为happy考察形容词.feel是连系动词,后接形容词作比较级.
5.longer改为long 考查副词.此处没有比较对象,要用副词原形.
6.cloud改为clouds 考查名词复数.cloud是可数名词,根据语境要用复数形式.
7.interested改为interesting 考查现在分词.现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征.
8.comfortably改为comfortable 考查形容词.journey是名词,要用形容词修饰.
9.in改为by 考查介词.by air意为"乘飞机",是固定搭配.
10.make改为making 考查动名词.of是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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