题目内容
17.Chen Yifan,the student from a local senior high school,hit a BMW car parking along the street when he was passing by on a bicycle on February 4,leaving the rearview mirror broken and several scratches over the body of the car.Chen left a letter of apology to the car owner,together with an envelope of 311 yuan he had earned from part-time jobs during the winter holiday.He put them at the inside of a door handle.
The car owner surnamed Xue found the letter and cash the next day and got so touched by Chen's honesty.With the help of local police Xue located the student on February 10 in the hope of returning the money.He told the police that he also wants to fund Chen's education if the family cannot afford it.
On February 11,Chen's mother,after knowing what her son had done,voluntarily contacted Xue trying to compensate for the repair of 13,000 yuan.But Xue turned her down firmly.
The next day,Xue's daughter visited Chen's family with a grant of 10,000 yuan for his education.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)如果你是那位中学生,你会怎么做?你又如何看待这位车主的行为?
(2)如何理解"穷有信、富而仁"这句话?
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题.
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当.
Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW.Moved by his deed,the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education.
Chen has really set a good example to our fellow Chinese students.Though he could have left the scene unpunished,he decided to shoulder the cost of repairs.Meanwhile,that car driver Xue didn't pale in comparison with the boy.Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story.
As far as I am concerned,such harmonious relationship between them shows great advances in social morality.Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior..
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story
与通常的反应相反的,他们的车被抓了,薛显示出高程度的宽容和同情,这有助于故事的和谐.
高分句型二:
Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior.
尽管贫富差异,自卑者应该始终把诚实放在第一位,而过上好生活的人应该表现出更多的同情和自卑.
解答 One possible version:
Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW.Moved by his deed,the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education.
Chen has really set a good example to our fellow Chinese students.Though he could have left the scene unpunished,he decided to shoulder the cost of repairs.Meanwhile,that car driver Xue didn't pale in comparison with the boy.Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story(高分句型一).
As far as I am concerned,such harmonious relationship between them shows great advances in social morality.Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior(高分句型二).
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.